I have to admit I like the clean art. The expressions are nice as well. Well done.
Whilst I probably have read its summary, seen it and maybe even read a bit- I probably found it not to my liking. (I am an avid reader in Fanfiction. Well as long as yaoi isn't happening. I don't read yuri either.)
You could probably link it on the summary for easier access on those interested. your work seriously makes me want to go have a look. Good advertisement/publicity. XD